Warning

Here's my critique. You've got a pretty solid mood going on here, with pretty decent lighting. The perspective on the right is all wrong. Specifically, the texture on the right wall that's connected to the ramp should be in proper perspective. You've got it following the ramp, but it should be following perspective lines that are drawn from the horizon. Also, builders never make doors or windows that follow a slant like that; they are always made level.